The "Good Sanctuary": Chapter 1: The Bad Man or The Good Man?

Date: 10/9/2019

By CalMehJuly

This huge wood cabin surrounded with trees of green and a wall guarding at all with a golden or black gate at its opening. Outside the cabin were the woods and forests. My friend Nat and I were sneaking in this place wondering what was in it. We went inside seeing people who were at our age or around it. I saw 3 faces I know. J E and Z. This place had everything you would need to survive. It all led back to the man who was running this place. A short big man who wore a black suit and had black hair. He also had a mustache and was quite pale. He seemed very welcoming. Seemed so at first glance. I said hi to J and smiled shyly. He welcomed us and shared his food with us. This place was too nice and too great to begin with. This place is too fishy i thought. I didn't tell Nat about what I was thinking. But she kinda knew too. He offered us some chicken from a chicken or turkey. The skin and meat was so shiny and warm. I took a few bites. I can't stay here any longer or I would want to not leave. So we flied away. Or at least i did. I flied and she ran. I could see the man running towards us. I told her to hold my hands and jump really high. I did this before a long time ago in another dream. I could do it again! Right? She held both of my hands. Jump I told her. Jump! She did so. Every time we did it...we... Thanks for reading! Read Chapter 2 to contine this dream if you want to know if I suceed or not, thanks! FACTS: I had this dream last night And check down below the notes for more info Also ive been doing chapters because I want it to seem like a short story. Writing it down is one thing but making sure the details and cliffhangers are actually good is another for me anyway. You could say its my goal to improve my writing. It is probably. :p